A dark line they draw to end,
our eternal relationship of pure divine,
to reveal the time they had set for us.
You and I, living the briefest moment,
against their rules, outside confine,
longest memories for both of us.
-Kritika Vashist
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From the Soul to the nib of the Pen 
Very nice …….. and thought provoking.
As an aside, the Like and Comment links in my email notification did not work. I had to go your site and select English Poetry! 🙂
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That’s so kind of you. Thank you 🙂
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very deep nice thought keep sharing thank you
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Thanks 🙂
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Deeeep and I loved it z:)
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Thaaaanks! ❤
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Its simply mind blowing. I love it when you write about such deep thought provoking stuffs and about eternal love of pure divine. It feels so enchanting and magical as if fairies dancing around. And yeah it does feel soo romantic ❤ ❤ ❤
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Haha! I am glad you like it. Thanks. 🙂
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Hey i have a funny feeling you are almost of my age. My birth year is 1994.
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I am an year older than you. Mine is 93.
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oh thats really wonderful. Its great to find a friend who is somewhat of my age. It always fun to talk to people within same age group. 🙂
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Beautiful as always! The abstract is………? 😉 for an angel
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…and I love you as always!
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You snuck up on me!
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I am an angel! I don’t knock the door.
But I can play knock knock jokes with you.
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How quickly
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In my language it takes me less than a minute.
In English WITH YOU, might be challenging.
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A scolding from an angel feels like nirvana to me! 🙂
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I didn’t scold you, though. I’ll be sweet to you, forever!
By the way, I remember a pun I had made on a song by nirvana.
Boy: Baby, tell me where did you sleep last night?
Girl: You Nirvana know!
😀
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I do not wish you to worry! I am not posting for a couple of days. 🙂
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Krivashist@gmail.com
Thanks for letting me know.
Hope you are doing fine 🙂
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I am fine! Hurry!
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Good then! Stay awesome as always.
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I got late by 14 minutes 😦
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I love this
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Thanks, Annie.
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Beautiful words here…
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Thank you, Prajakta 🙂
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Wow that was intense. Well Done
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Thanks.
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Check your mail
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Very profound.
-Naima
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Wow, this is moving ❤
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Thanks, love 🙂
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Reblogged this on Nilzeitung.
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Thanks 🙂
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to be very keen on doing sth.
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Woaw. Noted to self, bookmark. Very fluid yet gripping this one.
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Thank you for kind words, Christy 🙂
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I absolutely love your site.. Very nice colors & theme.
Did you build this website yourself? Please reply back as
I’m trying to create my own personal blog and want to find out where you got this from or just what the theme is
named. Many thanks!
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