The wind whipped through the stage
bestrewed with blood and lifeless bodies
that dared to stand against the hatred,
smelled of their bloodthirsty revenge.
The windows of the schools that had
painted the colorful future of innocents
on the walls of gratitude and peace,
broken down by their malevolence.
The noises of their guns and false morality,
slitted the eyes and the voice of humanity.
The sky that once wore a rainbow of happiness,
veiled behind the stains of blood of innocence.
– Kritika Vashist
This is in response to the free writing challenge given by Geethu. You can know about the challenge here.
To be honest, I took more than 10 minutes. I took around 15 minutes, because I had to complete the poem. Apologies for breaking the rule, Geethu.
(When I read the word innocence, I thought of childhood, happiness and carefree days. I thought I’d write about it, but it would have taken me to a road where I would realize how time and responsibilities took away our innocence. Maybe I was not in a mood to write about it. As I started to type, I realized that time and difficulties do snatch away our innocence, but what about those who never got a chance to live their innocence? And I was ready to pen down my words. Also, I am not attaching any picture to this post because I do not have courage to look through grievous pictures.)
Writing a poem is impressive. I don’t think that I could do that myself 🙂
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Had I wrote about it in paragraphs, I would not have known how to end it.
AB, you did write one yesterday. Keep going! 🙂
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Excluding those ridiculous poems that I have written before, the poem that I have posted yesterday may only be the second more serious poem that I have written, so, I have a long way to go 🙂
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Good luck. You have people who would encourage you 🙂
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Thanks.
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The way you write is petty impressive, the words carry a great meaning.
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I am glad you think so 🙂
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That is a very impacting poem, Kritika! Compliment. Glad you broke the rules 😉
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Thank you, Erika! 🙂
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😊
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The topic was a bit saddening but you did justice with it 🙂
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I think so 🙂
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Just loved it ..
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🙂
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This is..incredible. Especially considering that it was written in fifteen minutes.
I wish I could write this well.
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Thank you!
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WOW!!!! So brutally powerful and poignant.
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Thank you, Annie 🙂
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A striking and poignant voice comes from this poem. Such a clear voice for the innocent rises above the malevolent false morality that preys on the innocent. Well done Kritika.
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Thank you, Dan. I’m glad you think so.
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i have nominated you for 3 day quote challenge… check here https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/06/11/quote-challenge-day-1/ 🙂
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Oh! Thank you so much, Ashish. I’m so glad. I’ll reply on the post soon. 🙂
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U welcome. 🙂 Will be waiting for your post 🙂
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Very nice
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🙂
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Great post and the way you described Innocence was saddening but reality.
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I know it is.
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Beautiful one☺
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🙂
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Reminded me of the Peshawar tragedy.
PurpleHazel98
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Same here!
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You wrote the bad really good. 🙂
Although innocence is really hurt by brutal acts of mankind.
Keep writing 🙂
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Thank you, Sankalp 🙂
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