Comfortably breathing in
her golden-yellow dress
she whirls in eddies of soft
wind permeating every space
of her infinite field of liveliness.
The sunlight falls on her skin
and she shimmers artistically
like a sunflower in the garden.
The glow in her eyes reflecting
the sun of love and seclusion.
Her feet dance on the gentle soil
to the sound of birds chirping
leaving imprints of her tenderness.
Her amiable laugh echoes in the
valley, embracing all of her.
At night, the stars shine in her eyes
the affectionate stare talks about
all her insanity, all her dreams.
Wearing moonlight every night
she sleeps hearing the soulful
melody of the waves that sing
her songs of love and intimacy.
In the fathomless love
in the beauty of nature
in cold nights, in warm days
her romance blossoms.
– Kritika Vashist
This is in response to Bhavpreet’s Free Writing Challenge. Also, I am finally done with all free writing challenges 🙂
How beautifully poetic and romantic, Kritika! I love it¨!
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I am glad you liked it. Thanks so much 🙂
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Wow! Quite lovely. I could see her twirling in that “sunflower dress” and showing an infectious and carefree smile. I could see her silhouette against the moon, and the reflections of the moon’s light dancing on the waves behind her. I could see her at perfect “oneness” with her world. To love, and be loved in return. What more could anybody ask? 🙂
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You wrote a poem in comment, Colin. Lovely! 🙂
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I truly enjoyed the way you mingled love, summer and nature together. All of the elements together to capture the feeling of romance. Well done!!
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I am glad that you enjoyed reading it. Your comment makes me smile, Rob! ^_^
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And your post made me smile! 😍
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😀
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you write so well
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Coming this from you means so much 🙂
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That was just beautiful :’)
I have no words ^_^
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Thank you so much. Your comment made me smile 🙂
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♥ 🙂
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hey you wrote very well . amazing .. i never thought it can be so fab. what to say .. i love it ….
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you for the opportunity 🙂
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Admiring the way you see the world. Beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I really loved this, it gave me such a pretty picture in my mind 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you 🙂
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How nice to read such delicate poetry, the kind that enamoured you to me in the past, with the beautiful flow and lack of angst, you have retreated from your dark place and relit the ebon blackness of the earth! Welcome home, Angel 😀
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This makes you call me awesome and special. Showers love on you ❤
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You’re good. ♥
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Thank you 🙂
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I already told you that i love this but i once again wanted to let you know that this is my All time favorite. I actually go to some dreamland when i read this … i just love this …. Muuuahhn … 🙂
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That means a lot to me. Bhavpreet. Thank you for your kind words and I am glad that one of my works has become someone’s favorite 🙂
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goosebumps 😉
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