The eyes that reflects back the twinkling,
the voice that shuts the noises,
words that hide the faces,
I feel rejoice in your arms, under the sky.
The touch that lingers for days, penetrating through the soul,
the permanent image that forms in eyes,
breathes that settle down the heart,
Lost in exultation, in your arms, under the sky.
The taste of yours that keeps away from worldly desires,
the love that flows,
those eyes that talk,
I enjoy the eternal felicity in your arms, under the sky.
Your grip taking me to the right direction while I’m going nowhere,
ending the ache in my head,
ending a throbbing pain,
Away from consternation, in your arms, under the sky.
Far off the machines of the world, tuning with the universe,
a stream of fascination,
filled with entranced,
I have been shielded by your arms, under the sky.
DAY 4
This is in response to Prateek’s Five Photos, Five Stories Challenge. Thank you, Prateek, for giving me this wonderful opportunity.
The challenge is – “Post a photo each day for five consecutive days and attach a story to the photo. It can be fiction or non-fiction, a poem or a short paragraph and each day nominate another blogger for the challenge”
My Nomination for Day 4 is Erika.
Kritika Vashist
Very nice! Beautiful poem:)
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Thank you very much 🙂
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That was very romantic, Kritika.
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Thank you, Rob! ^__^
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You’re welcome, Kritika! 💗💗
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It’s amazing how you and I have interpreted the same challenge so differently….
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Not interpreted, but doing it in a different way; there are many listed in the rules, no?
Also, I am not at all creative at narrating the scene, like you do.
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Oh you know the narrative wasn’t what I was talking about, and yes, it is meant to about personal creativity.
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If it’s not narrative then what is it, if may I know.
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It’s the whole way we treat the subject. You post a pic and take an idea from it and go from there. I put a pic and stay grounded around it.
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Oh, I see. Well, yes. I didn’t think of it that way.
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Well, you do say I think a lot!
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That’s a quality, Bhatnagar!
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I like the way you forsook defining that adjective! 😀
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Ayio! 😀
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If I may know*
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Only you could diffuse the amazing image with love and make it look so simple. After reading the poem when I again look at the image, it seems as if the clouds tell the story of being witnesses when all your 5 senses sing the sensation of love.
An amazing and an intelligent post. Only upon reading the second time I noticed how you talked of all the senses 🙂
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Here is my friend with his wonderful comment. You amaze with you such appreciation. Big Thank you. 🙂
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Well, if you could come up with something as good as this after giving up, I had to be inspired 🙂
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The next one is too short. Don’t believe much in me, Bing! 😀
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I ended the challenge with a haiku! Let’s see if it can be shorter 😀
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Not a haiku!
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Exceptionally beautiful , Angel
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Thank you, soldier!
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Are we speaking?
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Gmail please.
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Infinite and wonderful! Both writing and picture 🙂
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Thanks so much, Sarang! 🙂
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This is such a romantic poem, such deeply felt words. Beautiful! Thank you for nominating me. Of course I accept! I love it!
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I am glad to hear that. Thank you and all the very best 🙂
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Thanks, Kritika 😊
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I gave u an award at :
https://decodinghappiness.wordpress.com/2015/06/18/i-am-an-encouraging-thunder/
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Thank you, Himali. I’ll reply to it soon 🙂
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🙂
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+Transmission Lines 😉
typical in a landscape 😛
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Lol!
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