The clean raindrops fell
from the ecstatic sky on
her artistic curves of clavicle
making it the purest sea
I would want to engulf me.
(I had written nano poetries on Clavicles earlier as well. If you like, you may read them here.)
– Kritika Vashist
From the Soul to the nib of the Pen 
Kritika, you write beautifully ❤
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Thank you very much, Akanksha! ❤
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https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2015/02/27/hell-in-a-handbag/
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Beautiful. 😉
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Thank you 🙂
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Breathtaking Kritika xo
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I’m glad you liked it, Kelly. Thank you 🙂
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So you have a fetish for collar bones? 😉
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Perhaps.
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Two points, first of all, it was beautifully written. Secondly, this is the first poem that I’ve ever read written about a clavicle. 🙂
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Two points, first of all, thank you.
Secondly, you make me smile 🙂
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🙂 Making you smile is my motivation, Kritika!
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You are too cute!
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Apparently, I’ve read one other poem on clavicles, as so eloquently pointed out by another reader. As *you* understand, my response was intended to be light hearted and make you smile, not to have historical accuracy. My apologies to you if you are offended.
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Yes, I know, Rob!
And hey? No apologies. There is no reason for me to take offense whatsoever.
❤
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Thank you, Kritika. 💗 Your support is greatly appreciated!
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You are my tattoo friend. Anything for you 😀
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Thank you, dear. The same for you, tattoo needles and all!
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umm, if I may point something out here.
Firstly, I followed the link at the end of the post.
“Secondly”, the first comment there is yours (exactly 2 months ago same day) and the post is a poetry on “Clavicles”.
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I did not realize it until now, MS, that I wrote those nano poems exactly 2 months ago.
About Rob’s comment: Nobody remembers what one wrote months ago, even I would not want someone to expect me to remember. So that is not an issue. I know what he intended 🙂
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Just a simple observation, nothing more, nothing less. 🙂
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Well, thank you 🙂
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Beautiful. Artistic. Creative.
#threeWordsToDescribeYourWriteUp
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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I never knew nano poetries were a thing! Great post!
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Thank you, Gaurav! 🙂
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You’re welcome, Kritika!
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This has a certain grace to it…very nice Kritika. Cheers =)
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Thank you, Chris. 🙂
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I have to agree. No chance not to. In the case of the poem, engulfed is divine pleasure. Loved it!
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I am glad to know that, Dan. Thank you 🙂
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🙂
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Beautiful Kritika, you write fantastic…
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Himali ❤ Thank you!
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😁😀😊
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Your words paint a lovely picture, Kritika. :O)
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Thank you very much, Paulsome! 🙂
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;o)
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Your words ornate the clavicles!
amazing!!
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That’s a wonderful comment and compliment. Thank you very much ❤
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My Pleasure!
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This was lovely Kritika! 🙂 My friend, who is studying to be a doc told me that their prof said that clavicle is the “beauty of a woman” Nicely captured 🙂
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Thank you, Prajakta.
Wow! I am so glad to hear that. I believe in the same. I feel I can write on it more and more. 🙂
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[…] 8. Kritika @ From The Soul To The Nib Of The Pen […]
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Nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award
http://stephysweetbakes.com/2015/06/30/fourth-versatile-blogger-award/
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Nano poetry, heard it for the first time 🙂 but, this one is awesome 😀 and may be I can try one myself 😛
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Thank you, Darshith and yes, you should 😀
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[…] Inspired from Kritika‘s post “Clavicle“. […]
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Hayeee
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Aye haye 😉
How have you been, love?
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I have been great thankyou 🙂 how are you??
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I’m doing fine too 🙂
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[…] (Inspired by Kritika’s poetry on the same. You can check them out here, and here.) […]
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