I roved the lonely roads, crowded places.
My shadows companioned me through.
I sang songs in the tone of blues.
My shadows listened to all.
I set down my melancholies on paper.
My shadows read them unprejudically.
I danced my tearfulness under the rain.
My shadows contemplated my aches.
I sank down in the light of candlelit room.
My shadows shared my silence with me.
But one night,
I collapsed in the fathomless darkness
My shadow; nowhere to be seen
Where did my friend go? A cry, voiceless.
I plumped myself down in dispiritedness
My soul held me and enlightened;
The true one stays even in the darkness.
– Kritika Vashist
(It felt like I didn’t post for ages, but here I am.)
Lovely, Angel!
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Me or the poem? Hehe.
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I’ll answer that for him ………… THE POEM! 🙂
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Thank you, Colin. 🙂
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You are very welcome. You may well have angelic traits, but that does not transmit over the internet too well hence my conclusion that the poem was the object of his compliment! Still friends???? 🙂
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Perhaps. Yes yes, Colin. He is too kind to call me his angel. 🙂
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What a conundrum! 😉
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Hehe! I know! 😀
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Wow… this is so beautiful.. It is truly said that you are your best friend.. u conveyed the idea so well ❤ Kudos (y)
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Indeed. Thank you, Himali ❤
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My pleasure dear 🙂
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Boah! That was a really deep poem! I am coming with a little gift. Check this out: https://erikakind.wordpress.com/2015/07/02/sisters-everywhere-no-matter-what-gender/ Don’t worry, there is no obligation to participate. Just wanted you to be in that circle.
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Thank you, Erika.
I’ll check the link, but after reading the word ‘sister’ on the link, I’m so glad to know that you thought of me for this. Love you! ❤
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Of course, Kritika! You have become such a dear friend within a short time 😊
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You too have! 🙂
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😊💖
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a poem having enormous depth in it… a masterpiece from your side… 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ashish! 🙂
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The loss of a friend is usually shrouded in melancholy, and you’ve conveyed that so well, Kritika. It has seemed that you have been away for a while, and it’s wonderful to “read” you again. 😀
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So glad to hear that! Thank you, Rob! 🙂 😀
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Wow.
Such serenity. Such awesomeness.
Kudos.
Keep writing.
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Hey,
I’m nominating you for a 3 Day 3 Quote Challenge.
When you find free time, do drop by the link.
https://shadowsinmidnight.wordpress.com/2015/07/02/3-day-3-quotes-challenge-day-1-character/
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Thank you for considering me for this challenge. 🙂
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Thank you for thinking so and for appreciating.
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” Scared of lonely roads,
I withered and flickered
What beauty was the voice
The songs kept me warm.
Stories I read of life and love,
Words were beautiful, I thought.
Dancing in the rain, I enjoyed every drop,
I let out a tear when you ached.
Serene, you looked in the warm candle,
Was this love, I thought.
And one night, I met my maker in the darkness. Never knew it could be this dark without you.
Scared I was at first. But your thoughts gave me courage. Searched for you in the world’s corners, when I heard your silent cries, I followed your song,
I searched the lonely streets and the fiery rain, but I was lost. Without you I felt the emptiness. I was empty, I thought all along.
And I saw you in the candle light, the joy it gave I could never fathom. No longer was I empty and swore never to leave you again.”
– Your Shadow.
PS: I apologize if I ruined your poetry. I think I walked all over it. Really sorry about that. Couldn’t help it, ’cause my name, you see.
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You appreciate me first, and then you think that this comment might have ruined my poem with yours. Think again, maybe?
I have taken no offense and so no apology is needed 🙂 I never believed that someone’s poetry can ruin others. Poetry is nothing but your creativity with words and thoughts wandering inside, it can neither offend anyone else, only you, if that happens, nor can be criticized.
I wrote a rough draft about how shadow is my friend, but then after few days, I realized that shadow isn’t there in darkness, and thought of writing about it. I have never believe in friendships that stay only when light is there, perhaps, I am too rigid to change with the definition world tries to throw at you.
About yours, I liked your perspective. Isn’t it great how a word and an image can be defined in so many poetic ways?
About your name; well, it is “midnight” shadow, there is still some light around, and I hope it always stay with you. Have a good day, you! 🙂
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I have been adding thoughts and quoting people a lot these days and I wasn’t sure what they might be thinking for my actions. So, I wasn’t sure where I stand in this regard.
Yes, poetry is serene and speaks to the people in a lot of ways. Couldn’t agree more. 🙂
You are absolutely right in that aspect. I understood your purview through the poem. I just thought of adding the other side of the story, well I mean I tried.
Why, Thank You! 🙂
Poetry unites that very aspect, how a simple thing can be interpreted in so many different ways.
Yeah, I meant just the shadow part. But I like your perspective on it.
Thank You. 🙂
Have a good day, yourself! 🙂
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Poetry is an endless journey, my friend. There will be different opinions and views, but we would still keep walking the very same roads.
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Indeed, it’s a long journey.
Perhaps, different roads that converge destination called Poetry.
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I changed it to ‘endless’, realizing that it never really ends.
Yes, true words!
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Of course.
It never ends.
It finds new life with each one.
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Certainly.
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Hello Kritika!
I just mentioned you in this article, please go and take a look: https://hsampson.wordpress.com/2015/07/02/i-am-a-dragon/
You don´t need to do anything, this is just a way for me to thank you for the inspiration I have from your blog and to thank you for your support.
Thank YOU sincerely.
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Hello, Hector!
How are you doing?
Thank you for this honor. You are kind and generous to say that for me. Your blog inspires me more. Thank you for the wisdom that you share.
Regards.
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Thank you always dear Kritika!
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Kritika, this poem is TOO GOOD 🙂 Loved the idea of shadows and soul 😉 I was fearing that you may end calling the Shadows, The True One. But, thankfully you had a twist and it was very well absorbed by me 😛 Keep writing Girl 😉
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We think alike on some subjects, no? 😀
Thank YOU VERY MUCH for appreciating. Yes, I will. 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂 Yeah, like-minded people 😉
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Wow. It’s magical 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Stunning! Loved it ❤ It I’d phenomenal! Kritika, you truly are an artist.
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Oh, my goodness! Akanksha you are very generous. Thank you for saying such appreciative words for me. Each one of us here are… 🙂 ❤
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