She shines through the cracks on her skin
She stands tall despite of her broken bones.
The radiance of her smile in the face of
trouble and misery, phoney and deceiver.
What is she like? Asked the wide-eyed world.
She is like the mirror, reflecting vitality
of her high spirits even when broken.
– Kritika Vashist
Another brilliant piece! 🙂 Beautifully written! The image is apt! Last two lines are words too deep, stringed to give hope to the ones going through the same, as what they need, is only to believe in oneself. 🙂
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Indeed.
You summed it up beautifully, Shambhavi. Thank you for your wonderful comment. 🙂
Hugs.
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Beautiful words dear girl
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Thank you, Annie. 🙂
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Simple, Elegant and has the power to touch people, lovely work Kritika:)
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Thank you very much, Brunda 🙂
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Touched..:)
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Thank you 🙂
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profound piece of writing… 🙂 the concluding lines are beautiful… great work… 🙂
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Your words inspire me to write. Thank you, Ashish 🙂
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How you defined “her” was incredible!
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Thank you, Izza! 🙂
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“She is like the mirror, reflecting vitality
of her high spirits even when broken.”
brilliantly crafted lines Kritika !!!!! ❤
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Thank you, Himali! ❤
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😀😀😀
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//high spirits even when broken// symbol of a world class exceptionally brave girl 🙂 beautiful
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Thank you, sup 🙂
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B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. Great job Kritika!
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Thank you so much, Prajakta. 🙂
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Another good piece of writing. The wide-eyed world should have their eyes fixed on your works.
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Your words of appreciation means a lot to me, Heath. Thank you very much. 🙂
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Well written…love it!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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“She” is always more than “He” in the number of words and every other aspect. Strength, tolerance, care and will power are all her jewels and she wears them with dignity 🙂
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You, my friend, just penned a beautiful poem.
Thank you for such a wonderful comment. 🙂
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Thank you Kritika 😀 Actually, I wrote the comment here and I liked it so much, that I wrote the same comment as my today’s post 😀 My post inspired from yours 😉
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I read it and commented there 😀
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Yeah, I saw 😀
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Reblogged this on Penning, Venting, Singing..
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you for writing. 🙂
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❤
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This is Beautiful !!
“She is like the mirror, reflecting vitality
of her high spirits even when broken.”
**Clap Clap**
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you very much. It’s nice to have you here 🙂
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You are really sweet 🙂
God Bless
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🙂
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