The blue sky unveils itself
exposing its darkest layers
where I pin my sorrows
the reflection of which
flashes into the watery eyes
The quiet inter-flow of sweat
of the frozen skin with tears
warms up the numb emotions
The mind gets heavy while the
weight of my steps drop off
The wind howls in madness
only to peel off my skin, slowly
to let the melancholy assail me
while sorrows sways on the
morbid beats of the darkest night.
– Kritika Vashist
The inner world can be so painful that the roughness of the outer world isn’t even felt anymore.
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Yes Erika, that is a painful truth.
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But only when we feel the pain we recognize it and can let it work out until it reaches the surface. It is much worse to push it back and let it eat you up deep inside of us, not know it is that pain.
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I agree with you. These thoughts came to my randomly and sometimes nights let the pain feed on you. However, once we get familiar to it, the intensity of pain reduces and we learn to live with it.
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Very true, Kritika. I guess we also learn not to run away from the pain. It helps to dive down to the bottom in order to explore the volume and see where it ends. It often shows ways out of it.
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Yes, true. It all needs is acceptance and patience.
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Ohhhh patience…. something I will deal with my whole life long… lol
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Everybody does 😀
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Always good to know that no one is alone with their problems….lol
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Hehe. 😛
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😀
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There is beauty, even in your darkness. I hope your weekend finds you in your bright light again.
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Random thoughts, Dan. I’m doing fine. I’m glad to know that you think it’s beautiful. Thank you so much 🙂
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You are most welcome and glad to hear all is well. Of course, it is a credit to your writing that it evokes such emotion. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Thank you, Dan. You too have a wonderful weekend 🙂
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Beautiful and haunting.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Splendid, darling
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Thanks so much, Annie 🙂
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You write so beautiful
Sometimes I feel like having crush on your writings! 🙂
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Oh, my! I’ve never received such a compliment for my writing. Thanks so much, Sankalp. Means a lot! 🙂
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I love the way you use words Kritika!! Thanks for this!
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Thanks so much, Hector 🙂
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The quiet inter-flow of sweat
of the frozen skin with tears
warms up the numb emotions
This is so beautifully penned K ❤ Your choice of images is also great 🙂
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Thank you always, Himali. 🙂
Love and hugs.
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❤
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I just nominated you for an award 😊: https://erikakind.wordpress.com/2015/07/17/two-more-for-this-week/
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I’m using via phone. I’ll check on desktop. Thank you, love! 🙂
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Take your time, Kritika ❤ ❤ ❤
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so niceeeeee
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Thank you 🙂
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hi! just happened to come across your blog, and oh my, what poetry! The imagery it generates and the depth of pain it reflects… mind blowing! I am a fan! 😀 ❤
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Hello. Thank you for reading the blog and for such kind and heartfelt appreciation. It means a lot to me. Nice to have you here. Stay around 🙂
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Great to catch up on your poems K. I like it when you drip melancholy, there is an element of honesty to it that is as poetic as it is unnerving.
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Aw, thanks so much for reading them. I’m glad to know that you like them. Thanka for your encouragement 🙂
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I JUST LOVED THE POEM !!!!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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