The mountains are high and my feet are bloated;
Pinned hopes are taken off by the wind going wild,
Shaking my head as desolated poetries of life are unfolded;
The sky pours down in grief watching the lonely child.
Clothed in the weary skin, my soul naked in the twilight;
The darkness follows and the shadow leaves behind;
Oh! How the weight of the cruel world pulls down the kite,
That once flew high and bright like the lonely child.
Those with heart of a stone threw me away so far,
Where the petals have dried and the thorns are lined;
The night cries as the warm tear falls on my invisible scar,
And the moon wonders if God is the friend of the lonely child.
– Kritika Vashist
(I am trying to catch up with the blog, but it is now getting almost impossible. I am taking a short break, since I have a lot to sort out and a lot to do in coming days, and I hope that everything goes well. I will be back soon. Miss me a bit, okay?
Stay awesome.)
Don’t be gone too long or I’ll miss your lovely posts, like todays. Since you’re busy, please don’t worry about responding to the award I’ve nominated you for. Come back soon!
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Aw, Rob! ^_^
I suppose a week it will be.
I’ll definitely post it after coming back 😀
Thank you!
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You’re welcome, Kritika. I look forward to your return.
Rob
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😀
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Miss
We will miss
You & your poetry.
Everything will be sorted out buddy:)
Cheers!!
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Aw, Thank you very much, Upen 🙂
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How is it possible to not miss the person who writes every word with such great passion and feelings? I will look forward to your return and hope everything will turn out great.
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Thank you for your wishes, Gaurav. 🙂
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It is a good idea to take a break when we realize that we have to get some things into an order or to simply clear the mind. Of course you will be missed. But that is why we are all there waiting for you with open arms whenever you are back. Know, you are loved, Kritika ❤ 🙂
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I added that miss part for fun 😀
Yes, I thought so and hence the break.
Thank you, Erika for all the love. ❤
A big hug to you.
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I know it was meant funny by you 😉 But I was serious. Take good care, my dear friend. I am gone too for a week… but only vacation. Let’s meet each other next week again 🙂
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I know you are 😀
You too, lovely. Enjoy and keep smiling 🙂 ❤
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Yep, let’s keep smiling 🙂
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😀
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Enjoy your break 🙂
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It’s all work, though. Thank you, Richard 🙂
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Booooooo!!!!
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Hehe.
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Will miss you a lot. Not s little. :-). Be well.
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Aww! Hugs. 🙂 Take care.
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Lovely lines that perhaps express how it feels to have so much going on. I’ll miss you more than a bit. Take care and be well. Cheers =)
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Aww, I feel special ^_^
Thank you very much, Chris.
Have a good day 🙂
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I hope you get that all sorted out
Have a great break 🙂
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❤
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Beautiful!!! thank you Kritika, miss ya already!
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Thank you, Hector. I’ll be back soon. Have a good day 🙂
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Beautiful poem. Have a great break; it’s important 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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That’s dipped in the cup of emotions.
N ahem! 7 years!! Oh my God that’s huge… 😛
Come back soon 🙂
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Thank you, Sankalpw.
7 years, what?
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7 days to wait for your writing is like 7 years bud. Keep writing.
I’ll wait for u to come back. U write splendidly well!
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Aw shucks! 🙂
Thank you.
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Sankalp* Sorry for the typo.
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God loves the lonely child and gives until the the strength of the chil can take over! Love for you, Angel !
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I believe so. Right back at you, my friend.
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Those with heart of a stone threw me away so far,
Where the petals have dried and the thorns are lined
This is so touching, K </3
I'm gonna miss you !! ❤ Come back soon 🙂 Plan the Mumbai trip too !!
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Thank you very much, Himali.
Mumbai trip- Not happening soon, though. 😀
Love and hugs ❤
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Thank you 😇 will be missing u loads ❤
Tussi jaa rahe ho ?
Tussi naa jao 😘
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Muahh! ❤
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💕💕💕
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Beautiful would be an understatement but it has rendered me speechless. 🙂 ❤
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That means a lot. Thank you very much 🙂
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Good luck in sorting things 🙂 we all are here waiting for your return with the victorious smile on your face 😛 Love this poem 🙂 we all are lonely at some point or the other & God comes to our rescue 😉
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Hello, my friend!
Thank you for appreciating as always 🙂
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A wonderful poem as always kritika! You’ll definitely be missed
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Thanks a lot, Daisy. However, its been a week that I posted this poem, so now I am back 😀
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Just beautiful! ❤
You still get a lot of views even though you might have stopped writing. I lost a lot of views 😦
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Thank you, Steph, for appreciating 🙂
I am getting less views comparatively, since I have not posted for like a week. I guess, we will need to post atleast one post per day to boost it; however, I am not sure if it works. My blog views have always varied widely. There are days when my bar on stats is as tiny as a sapling.
Keep writing. You will be get them. ❤
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Thank you for your encouragement! 🙂 I’m glad I managed to find the time to write something on Friday! It was good to write again ❤
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I’ll read it soon 🙂
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Poignant and so intense Kritika! Loved the poem! So tragic and beautiful at the same time.
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I am glad to know that, Akansha. Thank you very much 🙂
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