Two Phrase Story (III) July 30, 2015October 15, 2015 Kritika Vashist Two Phrase Storyfire, ink, melancholy, paper, poems, she This is in response to Himanshu’s Two Phrase Story. Today’s phrase is: She turned the ignition off – Kritika Vashist Rate this:Share this:TwitterFacebookPinterestEmailLinkedInPrintTumblrRedditLike Loading... Related
You do phrases this very well, Kritika. A strong visual is hard to do in such a short phrase, but you achieve it well. Maybe we’ll see more of your phrase art in the future. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I’m glad that you think so, Dan. Thank you for your encouragement and appreciation 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Spilled ink burning down pages is an interesting visual reference. I can imagine the smothering of love in it. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Metaphorically it does most of the times. Thank you very much. , Christy 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
When he poured his blood into her ashes, she was reborn into a princess waiting to be loved forever and after LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
What’s the use when she again has to wait? 😀 Btw, it’s a beautiful imagery. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Yeah ! Don’t go with words 😉 May be I not so good poet What I meant to write was She will from then on will be loved forever and ever LikeLiked by 1 person
How would it look like! Ahh an intriguing debacle
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You do phrases this very well, Kritika. A strong visual is hard to do in such a short phrase, but you achieve it well. Maybe we’ll see more of your phrase art in the future. 🙂
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I’m glad that you think so, Dan. Thank you for your encouragement and appreciation 🙂
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It is always my pleasure 🙂
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Yaay, well done, as usual Kritika!
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Thank you very much, Hector 🙂
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beautiful piece… 🙂
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Thank you, Ashish 🙂
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Spilled ink burning down pages is an interesting visual reference. I can imagine the smothering of love in it.
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Metaphorically it does most of the times. Thank you very much. , Christy 🙂
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When he poured his blood
into her ashes, she was
reborn into a princess
waiting to be loved
forever and after
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What’s the use when she again has to wait? 😀
Btw, it’s a beautiful imagery.
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Yeah ! Don’t go with words 😉
May be I not so good poet
What I meant to write was
She will from then on
will be loved forever and ever
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Yes yes, I got it 🙂
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