Oh yes, I truly did. Yes, I remember we were gone both at the same time. So glad I did not miss any of your posts. How did you do? I did well, Sweden was cool but nature is breathtaking!
Pretty intense, isn’t it 😛
Let here down to the deepest trench in the ocean,
when she touches his soul that creates a tsunami,
together the waves of love wash away distance
reaching her heart he would taste the love
Basically I like to see things upside down,
where there is no hope
when angels like you feel sad
Thoughts blast of my head like a chain reaction
I cannot stop but see at things
from a different angle and boom!
Creativity comes out in its own form 😛
So your poem
my reaction
yet all possible
because of you
hence its yours
nothing mine 😉
Sometimes the tides are way too strong to fight off, it’s easier to let go and move on. Though there’s nothing like moving on in the true sense, a part of us is left behind…is lost.
Beautiful and intense. 🙂
Yes, that’s true. However, tasting the tears meant that she is with him in his difficult times even when she herself is in desolation.
Thank you, though 🙂
Yes, I get it. What I meant was, what if he is the reason for her desolation? Yet she chooses to stand by him during his difficult times. That’s the thing about poetry. You are free to see things your way. 🙂
From the Soul to the nib of the Pen 
Intense. ❤
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Thank you 🙂
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How romantic ❤
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I tried 🙂 Thank you, love.
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Very vivid, Kritika.
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Thank you, Paulsome 🙂
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My pleasure, and it really was a joy to read. :@)
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I’m so glad to hear that. *smiles*
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:O)
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OMG, this is deeply touching. The deep and strong connection through true love stated in only few words. Wonderful, Kritika!!!
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Hello, Erika. How have you been? How was your vacation?
I’m yet to catch up on my reading and it’s so nice to be here after a break.
I missed this :’)
I’m so glad that you felt this was touching. Means a lot. Thank you as always, Erika.
Love and hugs.
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Oh yes, I truly did. Yes, I remember we were gone both at the same time. So glad I did not miss any of your posts. How did you do? I did well, Sweden was cool but nature is breathtaking!
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I guess, I did fine. It wasn’t how I expected, but hey I’ve friends like you who motives me with their words and love 😀
Plan a trip to India now!
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Looks like I should do that! 😊 If you want feel free to email me, Kritika. Sometimes it helps to simply get things off of the chest. Just fyi 💖
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Yay yay yay! 😀
I was thinkin of doing that, Erika. I’ll do it soon after I am done with some work 🙂
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Take your time… I am there whenever 😊
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❤
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Wow! This is quite impressive!
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Reading wows makes me happy. Thank you very much 🙂
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Pretty intense, isn’t it 😛
Let here down to the deepest trench in the ocean,
when she touches his soul that creates a tsunami,
together the waves of love wash away distance
reaching her heart he would taste the love
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Yours is too, isn’t it? 😀
Thank you, Bhanu. Do post your as a post on your blog.
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Well I am good at reflecting thoughts, this is all your creation, let it be here at your own blog 🙂
I want my blog to be my own 🙂
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🙂
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Basically I like to see things upside down,
where there is no hope
when angels like you feel sad
Thoughts blast of my head like a chain reaction
I cannot stop but see at things
from a different angle and boom!
Creativity comes out in its own form 😛
So your poem
my reaction
yet all possible
because of you
hence its yours
nothing mine 😉
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You are kind to say that 😀
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Yours* I meant
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Let her drown to the deepest trench in the ocean*
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Sometimes the tides are way too strong to fight off, it’s easier to let go and move on. Though there’s nothing like moving on in the true sense, a part of us is left behind…is lost.
Beautiful and intense. 🙂
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Yes, that’s true. However, tasting the tears meant that she is with him in his difficult times even when she herself is in desolation.
Thank you, though 🙂
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Yes, I get it. What I meant was, what if he is the reason for her desolation? Yet she chooses to stand by him during his difficult times. That’s the thing about poetry. You are free to see things your way. 🙂
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Absolutely. There is never one meaning of a poetry written. 🙂
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I am searching for this lovely she …. 🙂
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I hope you get her 🙂 Good luck.
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I wish too … As it feels empty without that one and only …
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🙂
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OMG! Perfect Perfect.
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Oh, my! Thank you SO much ❤
I hope you are doing good.
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Wow you have such a gift with words Kritika!
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If you say so. Thank you very much, Hector.
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Yes I think so, and I am sure I am not the only one who has that opinion 🙂
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Thank you for encouraging 🙂
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How can someone reflect this much of depth in a few lines! Very profound, way awesome!
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Oh, my. Thank you SO much, Daisy ❤
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Such wonderfully expressed the love 🙂 Love your one-liners 😉 Keep them coming 😀
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I’m glad. Thank you so much 😀
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Very Beautiful!
Love Poem | Lovelorn Poetry
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Thank you.
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