Your love feels like the soft sunshine falling
On the face when the skin freezes in cold.
Your love feels like boisterous ocean waves
Taking me away every night with your memories.
Loving you is a an un-fathomed dream where;
Sometimes I flutter in an infinite sky of love, and
Sometimes I fall from your hands into a black abyss.
Loving you is getting stung by the honey bees
While tasting their moreish nectar from your mouth.
You, sometimes have been the moon in my dark nights;
You, sometimes have been the darkness itself.
You have been the rain pouring down my talking eyes;
You have been the pilgrim to the soul through my eyes.
You have been my love rose with all its thorns, the one
I let impassioned me, and whose fragrance still lingers.
Loving you was never an experience;
It always has been an endless journey,
Of embracing the pain and nothingness,
Of destroying oneself and rebuilding.
Before I die with this song inside of me,
And before these inimical episodes of life
Take you away and push me off the edge,
I want to sit and sing the song to you,
That I love you in echoing silence.
I love you in piercing loneliness.
I love you in desolation, in happiness.
I love you in my bedspread poetries;
For no reason and for eternity.
-Kritika Vashist
Beautiful!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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While I read this poem I was listening to the song I posted today. What a combination. Your poem is extremely poignant. Love is so much. We walk on the hightest mountains and through the deepest vallies. You conveyed that so beautiful. But wherever we have to go through, it wonderful to realize that we are able to love.
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I will check out that song. I wasn’t able to decide whether to post this or not, but then I did thinking there maybe some who will like it.
Thank you for appreciating, Erika as always. I love you.
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At least for me it was simply perfect!
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Very nicely written Kritika. I just hope that any future love does not read this as they may well be totally intimidated by your expressions of love. Perhaps you should just date poets????? 🙂
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Thank you, Colin. These are just thoughts about love in happiness and in desolation together. I don’t know even a poet would want to date me. Lol.
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Here Colin! Or perhaps, I took it in another sense
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Hey this is just amazing!!
Keep writing!
Keep smiling! 🙂
Akiraa xoxo
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Thank you, Akiraa. You too keep smiling 🙂 ❤
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:))
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a wow one !!!
just loved it….
you write so well….:)
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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How beautifully expressed! Amazing work 🙂
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Thank you ❤ 🙂
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Si much has been said and weitten about love but the way you write gives it a new essence,as if the feeling has been expressed this beautiful by none other!
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Oh, my God. Thank you so much for saying that, Daisy. It means a lot. 🙂
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You are most welcome and you deserve it 🙂
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Oh, Daisy 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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whats your age btw?Just wondering,never mind :p
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Haha. I am 22. 🙂
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Oh,so am I 🙂 nearly 23!
COINCIDENCE 🙂
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That is awesome 😀
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🙂 🙂
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*so much
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Amazing! 😀
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Thank you ❤
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Wow!!
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Thank you, Hector 🙂
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That was so lovely, Kritika! I enjoyed reading every word.
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Aw, Rob. Thank you so much 🙂
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Zabardast 😉
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Thank you 🙂
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Hayee this is so good
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Haaaye, thank you 😀 ❤
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Lovely Kritika
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Thank you very much, ma’am 🙂
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