There is a question
A question never answered
Like a beautiful butterfly
That nobody ever captured
I have spent my life
Finding the answer
I have spent my life
Living with it; living for it.
They stop me and they say
There is no direction and no gate
But I believe that some day
My mind won’t be blind
My heart won’t shudder and
The butterfly will come and sit
When I have drawn all the light
Listening to the soul within.
-Kritika Vashist
Your poetry is so powerful and evocative. Are you considering putting together a volume to publish?
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Thank you very much, Charles.
I haven’t thought about it. Looks too difficult to do.
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Not as difficult as you think. Your poetry is beautiful.
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Thank you for saying that. It means so much to me. I will definitely try 🙂
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The butterfly is always elusive and a beautiful analog for the question never answered. I’ve used butterflies in one of my songs, and its beauty and delicate wings serve as wonderful imagery, as it has served in your wonderful poem.
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Which song? Please, share. And I totally agree with you. I am glad you liked my attempt, Rob ❤
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The last lines in my song are as follows:
When I look up to the sky, clouds are billowing butterflies,
It’s how I know you’re looking down on me..
https://weight2lose2013.wordpress.com/random-musings/whats-the-sense_-audreys-song/
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This is beautiful, Rob! Thanks for sharing 🙂
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‘The butterfly will come and sit…soul with in’
I found these lines very true and relatable.
No wonder, poets are deep thinkers. 😉
Great job Kritika!
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Glad to know that, Hargun. He he, I think they are 😀 Thank you!
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You’re welcome dear 🙂
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🙂
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Beautiful poetry flows from a beautiful spirit, Angel! 😀
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If you say so, soldier! 😀 Thank you ❤
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Beautiful indeed. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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This is really so beautiful, Kritika Cheers =)
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Thank you so much, Chris ^_^
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Butterflies can be a symbol for so much. I love how you use the lightness of it in your poem. I use butterflies on my books and quotes as a symbol of transformation and liberation. Wonderful poem, Kritika!
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Guess what? While searching for images I was reminded of you. 😀 You are now the second person who reminds of butterflies. Thank you, Erika ❤
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Wow, that is amazing, Kritika. What a compliment. Yes, butterflies have something that affects and inspires people in many ways. I am not surprised 🙂
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Very true, Erika 🙂
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🙂
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This is so nice creation… Almost everyone have some questions which remains unanswered and I too have… The beauty of this poem is one can easily relate to itself… An “exquisite”… 🙂
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I know, right! One day I hope we all find our answers.
Thank you very much for your appreciation 🙂
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I have nominated you for Blogger Recognition Award… check here… https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/08/16/blogger-recognition-award/ 🙂
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Thank you very much, Ashish. I really appreciate this award and I would post it soon 🙂
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I loved the beautiful picture you have painted, k !
My heart won’t shudder and
The butterfly will come and sit
Indeed, one day, the answers will find you 🙂
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Oh, I did not paint that picture. I don’t think I’ll ever do this amazing work.
I am glad you liked the poem. Thaaank you! ❤
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The choice is incredible though ! 🙂 so credits for that to you
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great girl!!
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Thank you 🙂
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How beautiful that day would be 🙂
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Yes 🙂
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So lovely 🙂 The thoughts of butterflies make me smile 🙂 I love Metamorphosis and how beautifully they come out of the cocoon 🙂
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Thank you, Darshith. I like them too ^_^
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Likewise 😀
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