Even after all this time
Waiting for your return
Looking back and knowing
How far I have come
Counting the days, the minutes
Writing the songs of longing
You say that it is just a dream
I’ll say,
I don’t mind keeping
My eyes closed forever.
-Kritika Vashist
From the Soul to the nib of the Pen 
Love is not a feeling we can just switch off… once released it flows like a flooding river. This is beautiful, Kritika, although a little disturbing in the end…
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Yes, I agree. I don’t know, but sometimes I like to add some melancholy. Thank you, Erika 🙂
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Melancholy is part of life and a little dramatic keeps it thrilling and exciting… lol
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Hehe. I agree 😀
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😉
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“Things I do for love..” By Jamie Lannister. Some are ready to sleep forever & some are ready to make others sleep forever.
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I like it. Thanks for sharing, Darshith 🙂
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Hi Kritka – Such a simple piece but it sent me into dreams of a peaceful fantasy! Lovely.
One small point of grammar however – the last line should read “My eyes closed forever”
Again. I Loved it.
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I am glad you liked it and you corrected me. Thank you very much, Colin 🙂
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Beautiful Kritika. You express it beautifully.
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Thank you very much, ma’am 🙂
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Vey beautiful, Kritika…Yes, some feelings we never want to lose. Cheers =)
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Thank you, Chris 🙂
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Very beautiful Kritika.. The last two lines are very touching..
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Beautiful and rich with longing. A touching poem.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Girl, why you gotta leave me in tears everytime? love this prose ,love ya even more 🙂
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Oh, my! I don’t know what to say, but thank you very much. Love and hugs to you.
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Beautiful as you 😍
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Thank you ❤
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Lately all I can say about your writings dear Kritika is Wow!
That is what art supposed to cause in the viewer!
Therefore you are an artist!
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Your words always encourage me, Hector. Thank you for being such a great friend and for your appreciation. 🙂
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Thank YOU and I am a fan of your Talent Kritika. Thank you always!
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I’m overwhelmed with your kind words. 🙂
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Don´t be, it is just the truth dear and admired Kritika
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🙂
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I really love to read all posts by you as they are simply amazing 🙂
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That means a lot. Thank you very much 🙂
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Wish your dream to continue … 🙂
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🙂
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