With the lightning in the sky
my words echo, as you say
breaking down all your
walls like a loud thunder.
While you still try to silence
the wind of endearment,
the words from the mouth
I once had put my heart
into screams at me;
“Like those murky clouds
quilting the entire sky, you
crowd me with gloominess.”
But what do you know
about the clouds, darling?
Before you murder them with
your false promises and pride,
in your painful game of love,
you must know that over
all these years of insanity
they have been charged with
so much unrequited love that
today they finally burst aloud
and they rain all that they
have held for so long,
for a sky that wasn’t theirs.
Look up and gulp the truth
down your burning throat
that all clouds have faded away
and they are never coming your way.
Kritika Vashist
Once they are too heavy and finally rain out… they are gone forever! Healing! That was a great metaphor, Kritika!
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Thank you so much, Erika 🙂
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So Nice.
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Thank you.
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Ur Welcome.
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this was intense…I really like it. You haven’t lost your touch!
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Thank you so much, and bless me that I never lose it 🙂
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Excellent poetry,so much of pain , In the game of love!!!
Loved every line each word.
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Thank you, Nisthur!
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Welcome!
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I wish you cloudless skies.
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They aren’t bad all the times, are they?
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I live with clouds, always have
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I like to be with them, sometimes.
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Drop by when you are in the neighborhood then….
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🙂
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Intense. Beautiful.
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Thank you! 🙂
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‘For a sky that wasn’t theirs.’ That puts it very well. Yes, there are Too many Johnnies-head-in-air,’ who Never Notice things, but Will speak a lot indeed.
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Thank you for reading and your comment, sir. You are right about it.
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