The lights in this big and empty room tremble as my legs shiver
and your name with each skipped breath touches my lips without kissing
The walls embedding your shadow echo the song I heard over the phone
and its words go all out finding the meaning without you around
I leave the door open, I leave my voice there
for you to come, for you to hear
Within the folds of the sheet of no end, I’ve hidden all my thirst and desires
and the fathomless creases on it read the letter I haven’t yet written
My hands stretch to touch your face emerging like a rainbow in the clouds
and my ears in this aching silence try to hear the song you haven’t yet sung
I shut the lights off, I shut my eyes
for a dream to come, for a love to live within
Until you come and wake me up
-Kritika Vashist
I’m a big fan of ur writing. U know that. This is another master piece of ur imagination
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I think it is more of feelings expressed strongly 😛
I was in similar chain of thoughts, though I didn’t want to capture them. It is very terrific. So I let them flow by.
She on the other hand has done a amazing work. If it is imagination and fiction, awesome. Really you have some amazing skills.
Cheers.
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Thank you, Bhanu 🙂
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You flatter me. Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on chithankalai and commented:
Fatal desperation?
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Thank you, sir.
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Very passionate and romantic…i could feel those emotions 🙂
How can he not hear, very cruel!
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Hahaha. Thank you so much, alok. 🙂
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You are wonderful writer !
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Your writing is so concise and warm. Lovely, Star
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Hello, Will. Thank you very much. How are you?
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Loved it. 🙂
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Thank you so much ☺
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🙂
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Gosh, how could I miss such a gem!!! Such deep feelings and expressed in your amazing way.
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Thank you so much, Erika 😘
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My pleasure, Kritika! 💖
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Wow your writing is really nice and your blog is aesthetic.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading 🙂 Nice to have you here.
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