The stars outside are still dancing
at the tune of the drunken moon
peeping through the window at
my drained body weary of the
malevolence flashing in the
eyes of the so called innocents;
The tick-tick of the broken clock
contrastingly lying peacefully on
the side of my sympathetic bed is
still convulsing my brain freighted
with unspoken unheard thoughts
wanting the silence to fade them;
The demon in his phantom glow
hasn’t yet howled its wonted
lullabies of the slithering night
inviting him to invade my mind
and to cover my consciousness
with his brooding profundity;
The softness of my merciful pillow
hasn’t yet soaked all the tears of
the love lost amidst the doubts
and the memories from the past
appearing as dark as the night sky
secretly spacing them in its infinity;
Living within my own complexities
my unfulfilled incomplete dreams
blurry or vivid in the darkness
perfect or imperfect in meaning
that I save for these silent nights
haven’t yet whispered their song;
Above all,
Reflective of the pensiveness
the words falling down from
the vaulted heights of my mind
into the warmth of the quilt
haven’t yet marked down the
last verse of my unheralded
nameless poem of tonight;
so keep out, shut the door
and don’t wake me up
for the night is still in its
leisurely contemplation.
-Kritika Vashist
Sweet poem. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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amazing really 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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I seriously love your drawings!
-Naima
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Thank you, Naima 🙂
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Wow! You’ve stolen each and every moment of the silent night and the sleep full of dreams so beautifully.! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Archita 🙂
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Most welcome, Kritika! 🙂
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And of course the sketch you’ve made is lovely. 🙂
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Epic love! !! Second last stanza was wow!!!!!!!
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Thanks, love 🙂
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Nice art work, great hands and I really adore the subject! a beautiful,poem, I think I have been angelified! 😉
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Will, ❤
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Heartfelt. 💟
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Thank you, Gail 🙂
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You are most welcome!
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There is just something about this..night, silence and peace ❤
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🙂
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Your sketches are so adorable. (Though a ‘bindi’ is missing here I suppose? 😉 )
After reading a poet named Kritika Vashist, for probably a month now, I find her poems to be the epitome of expressing thoughts and sentiments. What an artist you are 🙂
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Bindi sometimes, not always 😉
You and your appreciations! Although I believe your just praise me more than I deserve. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Oh okay 🙂
And Kritika, I am new to writing, but have been reading since childhood 😀 There are a few bloggers here whose writings I really look forward to and you are one of them. I think you don’t believe what you deserve 😛 You have a way to go with your talent. Keep creating 🙂
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Okay. I believe you. Thank you ^_^
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Night & its complexities & simplicity !! Beautifully described 🙂 You have a knack of describing feelings and things perfectly 😉
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Hehe. Thank you so much 😀
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Oho itne Thank you ek sath 😛 today’s my day I guess then 😀
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Itni appreciation ek sath! Today is my day too, I guess 😀
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Yes yes same pinch then 😛 ab bas weekend jaldi aa jaye 😀
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Aa he gaya! 😀
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Na na 😦 2 more days 😀 Oh aisa hota hai.. when something is far we don’t care but as that thing nears we are all excited & the clock runs @ the speed of a snail 😛 that feeling 😀 we will have to feed the snail i guess 😀
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After karma time is a bitch 😉
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And I think that expectations are bitches 😛 Oh.. we shouldn’t go down that path 😀 we will end up cursing ourselves also 😉 All time pass(both good & bad) 😦
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Yes, we should not. The blame is always on us for that.
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Blame is on us for the time passing? Is this what you mean? It all depends on the thinking of an individual & how he thinks of time & Karma & expectations & every other bitchy things 😛
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I meant everybody would put the blame on us only; people, time, karma or anyone 😛
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Oh yes that’s true 😉 But what others think about us is never our business 😛 our business is to make sure we reach where we want to reach at the end of each day or some amount of time 😛 but yes we can’t stop others from thinking what they wanna think, so better we channelize our thoughts to something beautiful & useful 🙂
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Do I need to add anything? You said it all, funny and seriously. 🙂
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You can add anything you want 😛 may be some of the tunes of your own Smelly Cat version 😀
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Arey kya yaar. Haha 😛
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