हाथों में कलम और किताब लिए
ख़यालो को नज़्म बनाते हुए
ज़िन्दगी सुलझ गई थी
उलझे हुए क़ाफ़िए मे।
Haathon mei kalam aur kitaab liye
Khaayalon ko nazam banate hue
Zindagi sulajh gayi the
Uljhe hue kaafiye mei.
Holding a pen and a book in hands
Turning thoughts into poetries
My life got untangled
In entangled rhymes.
-Kritika Vashist
The English version was very good. I can only guess the impact it would have if read in its original form. 🙂
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I am glad to kn that you liked it, Colin. Yes, of course, the original one sounds more poetic and impactful 🙂
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Lovely !!
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Thank you! 🙂
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❤ 🙂
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Really good! Keep it up !
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You are very sweet, Hargun. Thank you! 🙂
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Nicely written and translated.
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I am so truly glad that you think so. Thank you!
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lovely !!!
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Thank you 🙂 ❤
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Awesome..!
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Thank you 🙂
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Wishing for disentanglement! 😀
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Wishing for an email.
Love.
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You´ve got magic in your heart Kritika!
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Oh, no, Hector! You are too generous.
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Nahh, I am very objective in my judgements, so it is not generosity. You´ve got real TALENT! Peridod.
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Okay, sir! 😀
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bahut sundar… 🙂
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Bahut dhanyawaad! 🙂
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Very nice!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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wao I loved both the Urdu and English version!!!
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I am glad. Thank you! 🙂
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btw those are urdu words, s like you used the same words in Hindi too? sorry I cant read Hindi
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Yes, few are urdu words. I wrote them in Hindi font.
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oh nut great!
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🙂
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Wow.. Bahut khoob Kritika… Now my thoughts are entangled in these words!!
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you so much 🙂
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You are welcome.. 🙂
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अब क्या कहूँ कहने को क्या रह गया ?
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Shukriya 🙂
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