Looked for you through the unbending walls
Searched for your shadow between the sheets
While the broken pieces of our love on the floor
From the last night perforated my twisted feet.
Jotting your traces on the mantle wrapped around
I found myself lying knackered on the horizon line
While in the ocean of woe all memories drowned
Yet somehow the scent of yours inside me did survive.
Kritika Vashist
From the Soul to the nib of the Pen 
Beautiful piece of work Kritika !
“From the last night perforated my twisted feet.”…Loved the play of words.
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Thank so much! ❤
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Amazing feel of words …. scent of yours inside me did survive …. It made my heart feel heavy ….
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂
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The last line is powerful ❤
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Thank you ❤
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Poetess (Y).
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Hello, rapper!
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Poetess
You give a
Great impetus
To every writer
Out there
Your words
Once inked
Will be synced
Your writing
A hit among the masses(bloggers)
When are you going
To take classes?
Cheers!!
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Aw ^_^
Thank you so much for this, again.
Have you ever noticed that your name has U-Pen, isn’t that wonderful and the most amazing name?
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You are welcome:) haha. Untill rohit has left a comment on my blog even i din’t notice it. And today you have said the same Upen -U Pen. Indeed it is amazing dear. <3.
Thank you so much:)
Cheers!!
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It is absolutely. 😀
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Yo! 😀
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Very deep words and strong feelings, Kritika!
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Thanks so much, Erika. 🙂
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🙂
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Can I say, that your words evoked an exact and specific memory for me, as if you knew my life as well when you wrote it? Beautiful Kritika. Poignant, and so full of love.
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My poem becomes worth all the thinking, if these words connected to you in someway. This means a lot to me, ma’am. Thank you so very much, as always.
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Beautiful poem on love
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Thank you. 🙂
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☺
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[…] Kritika Vashisht […]
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great creation as always… 🙂
I have nominated you for Starlight Blogger Award… check here… https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/09/20/starlight-blogger-award/ 🙂
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Thank you very much, Ashish. Congratulations to you, too. I will try to post it 🙂
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I enjoy how you evoke such emotion in your poem. It spoke to me of that space between love, loss, and letting go. Great job, Kritika.
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Hello, Dan. Thank you very much 🙂
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Always my pleasure to read, Kritika 🙂
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You never cease to amaze me Kritika ❤ I love your poetry, you have an amazing talent!!
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Oh, Steph! Thank you for appreciating 🙂
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🙂
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As always your words penetrates the heart…loved it 🙂
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Oh, my! Thanks a ton! 🙂
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You are welcome dear 🙂
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Great piece
Very powerful and lots of great images
As always Sheldon
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Thank you very much, Sheldon! 🙂
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