When my laugh was louder than
the aroused waves at night
while your words filled
all spaces between the stars
when you held me close by my waist
hand in hand, a step forward, together
while the rhythms matched our heartbeats
when I almost fell from the bed
drinking wine from your mouth
while falling more and more for you
when only air was between us
while I loved you and you loved me too
and I whispered into your ear,
“Have I taken away your heart?”
and you held my face, in your hands
laughed and asked if I were too drunk,
and I was left to wonder
if I ever could even touch it,
when I almost lost myself to you
while you almost made me believe in love.
-Kritika Vashist
Beautifully sensual!
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Finally you are here. Thank you, Prateek ☺
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Phew….. Had to open a window, Kritika! That was amazing!!!
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Thank you so much, Erika 😘
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That was such a pleasure. Great piece, Kritika!
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Thank you again. Love you.
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😘😘
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Beautiful, Kritika!
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Thank you, Kunal 🙂
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👍
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Love this sweetie! You just keep getting better and better.
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Thank you. Thank you so much 💗
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You reminded me of two beautiful lines I read somewhere….
“I can see the universe in your eyes,
But I can never see you.”
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It is indeed beautiful. Thank you.
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Erotic but lovely … 🙂
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Thank you, ma’am 🙂
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Amazing!!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful .
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Thank you, Will 🙂
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Love is such a reward in itself, isn’t it. xo
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Sure, it is. 💗
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Love takes many forms. : )
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I think so too. Happy new year, Will 😉
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; )
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Stunningly beautiful!! 🙂
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Thank you, love 🙂
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