Do you see that poor child
with sweat running down his face
standing under the blazing sun
selling vegetables
of his empty belly.
Do you?
Do you see that rich child
with aggression on his face
under the same blazing sun
shouting at the driver for not turning on the AC
of his abundance car.
Do you?
*
Do you see that dark-skinned man
with sweat running all over his chest
wearing a faded ripped jeans
picking bricks to build a house
of somebody else’s dream.
Do you?
Do you see that suited man
highly infuriated
standing some feet away
fluffing the dust
of his own luxury.
Do you?
*
Do you see that frail old woman
with body almost starved to death
at a corner of the road
trying wiping her face wet with tears
of loneliness.
Do you?
Do you see that young couple
with glamour faces, holding a food bag
taking out an extra burger
throwing in the dustbin
of someone’s daily meal.
Do you?
*
Do you see that crippled boy
with painful smile on his face
moving through the crowd
trying to sell an inexpensive pen
of his illiteracy.
Do you?
Do you see that school girl
with sadness on her face
complaining to her dad
for not getting her branded colours box
of someone’s darkness.
Do you?
*
Do you see that smiling girl
with satisfaction on her face
wearing a school uniform
trying to fit her foot in brother’s shoe
of pennilessness.
Do you?
Do you see that football fan
with an unsatisfied look on his face
complaining to his dad
for not getting Nike, but Rebook shoe
of someone’s labour
Do you?
-Kritika Vashist
(July, 2014)
Goes onto highlight how much unequal we are…wish God didn’t do unjustice to so many.
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…or we can do our best to show others that they are one of us. 🙂
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Sadly, so often we don’t see. Thank you for the reminder…Cheers
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🙂
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I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award. Go to this link for details https://architarai.wordpress.com/2015/04/29/the-liebster-award-2/ 🙂
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WOW, I love the comparison *claps* ^_^
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Wish there weren’t any.
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Life doesn’t works that way love…
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This contrast between light and dark is something I see, but feel too small to be able to make a difference 😦 You are doing a great job highlighting this effectively, compelling the reader to think again of his capabilities 🙂
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Nah! Don’t feel small. Do your bit.
Bachpan me seekhaya tha na, “Boondh boondh se bharta ha sagar.”
We can do the needful by doing a bit for poor, trying to condemn the regressive thoughts and treating everyone humanely. 🙂
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Hehe yeah ! You are a wonderful soul. Always know it and be proud of it 🙂 I will remember these words ^_^
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Yes, sir! As you say.
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Well said. Nice work
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Thank you 🙂
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The best thing of yours is that you express your feelings into words very beautifully. This makes your words magical. It seems like every word of your poem is speaking. Fabulous.
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You are too kind to appreciate me so much. That’s a huge compliment. Thank you 🙂
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Good work is always appreciated.
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I hope we could bring the change..It always wrench me deep to see such calamities but indeed we are so blessed!Can’t thank God enough…A great reminder to value what we have ..thanks Kritika ❤
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Yes, we should thank God everyday for everything we have 🙂
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True that 🙂
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Do you reply to comments on your posts as well? 😛
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Kritika! I didn’t see :p Sorra let me see kaha par kiya comment? 😢😀
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Awesome work karthika… Cant count how many times I read this beautiful poem. Such a heart touching one….
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I am glad to know that. Thank you, Deepak 🙂
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