Nano poems on ‘Clavicles‘
“Let my words rain on your clavicles
I’ll taste the purest from there
leaving peerless imprints of my ink
like a rainbow in the sky.”
“I don’t quite remember
any poetry that I wrote
except the one
I had written on her clavicles. ”
“I wasn’t an accomplished painter
until my hands had discovered
and my colors had painted
on quintessential curves of her clavicles.”
“Sunlight falling on her clavicles
the mountain like curves
the warmth of her skin
the color of her skin unifying with the sunshine
I swear, I would not have regret
drowning myself in her
heavenly glorious volcano.”
“Tell me something you had always wished?”
She asked while the lights shimmered like a shy.
“If I could be that mole on your clavicles
I’d have stayed with you, gone with you.”
– Kritika Vashist
I found your poem to be sensual, tender and loving. Nicely done!
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Thanks a lot, Rob 🙂
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Nice one! 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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Enriching 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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i want to confess to you that your beautiful and sensual poems just make me crazy about you. I am in love with them seriously ❤ ❤ rather i am mad on them. 😀 Love them badly ❤
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That is a lot of appreciation. Thank you. I am humbled 🙂
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i am happy u feel humbled with my admiration and its not flattering i mean it from the bottom of my heart 🙂
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🙂
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No. Mail me again.
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Yeah.
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I am slightly busy so cannot chat at the moment. Will drop you a mail when I get free. Hope it isn’t important.
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its ok no problem 🙂
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wonderfull poem 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re quite talented. Hugs….
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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You are very talented with your words. http://www.segmation.wordpress.com.
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Thank you. You have a creative blog there. Nice to meet you.
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[…] (I had written nano poetries on Clavicles earlier as well. If you like, you may read them here.) […]
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I think this reveals a wonderful and delicate innocence. The pectoral arch of the body marked by the collar bones can be very sensual in it’s presentation without the risk of venturing far in the realm of Erato. It shows skill and balance in your writing. Well done Kritika!
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Thank you, Dan, for this wonderful comment. You make me smile. Thank you! 🙂
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You are most welcome, Kritika! I’m glad you smiled. I think expressing beautiful thoughts in this way speaks highly of the artist. I’m always honest in my expression of appreciation but I don’t want to offend.
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I agree with you.
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[…] (I had written nano poetries on Clavicles earlier as well. If you like, you may read them here.) […]
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[…] by Kritika’s poetry on the same. You can check them out here, and […]
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