राज़-ओ-नियाज़ जो थी मेरी ज़िन्दगी।
तेरे अलविदा से हुए अहले-इ-क़लम
इश्क़ की सुखन बयान करते अब मेरी तिश्नगी।
Raaz-o-niyaaz jo thi meri zindagi
Tere alwida se hue alhe-e-kalam
Ishq ke sukhan bayaan karte ab meri tisnagi
The intimate conversations between us were my life
Your goodbye made me a poet
Now my love poems narrate about my longing for you.
-Kritika Vashist
Beautiful!
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Thank you 🙂
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So poignant and beautiful – Cheers =)
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Thanks so much, Chris 🙂
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Profound 🙂
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Thank you, Daisy 🙂
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Wonderfully written & true!
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Thank you so much, Hannah 🙂
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The happenings in life which make us discover skills we wouldn’t have discovered without.
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Exactly and we find them out eventually. Thank you, Erika.
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😊
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I wish I had the option of rating it a 100 stars instead of 5 !
Tere jaane ka asar kuch aisa hua mujh par,
tujhe doondte doondte, maine khud ko paa liya.
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I remember these beautiful lines and thank you very much for saying that. Means a lot 🙂
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Hello, K 😊 some major missing happening !
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Aw! I am glad you are back here. I miss you, too. I’ll drop you a mail 😀
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Thank u 🙂 It is so nice to hear from you, K !
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🙂
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Beautiful. Bravo!
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Thank you very much, sir.
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May God very abundantly bless you!
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Thank you very much, sir. You are too generous.
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God bless you!
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🙂
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Too good 🙂 No words to mention how beautiful the urdu/hindi version is.
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Oh, I am glad you think so. Thanks a ton 🙂
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wow !!! lovey !!
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Thank you 🙂
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you Made me speechless…
its ultimate ..loved it! ❤
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Though we never really know when comes the end. 😉 😀
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Never should 😉
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Super cool 🙂 Hindi me b samaj me nahi aya 😀 But, english did the trick 😛
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I am glad. Thank you 😀
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🙂
I can’t think of a comment but this was beautiful.
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Oh! 🙂 Thank you very much! I am learning.
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One request, share more of them. I used to write as well but I stopped.
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I have written and they are under Hindi poetry section. I have few lined up. I will post them soon.
Why don’t you share yours? You can always pick from where you left. I can learn from you.
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They are on paper somewhere.Maybe one day I’ll share here with you. And hopefully you’ll like them. 🙂
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Oh, yes, do it soon. I would love. 🙂
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Sure. 🙂
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🙂
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Hayeee
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He he he!
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Good nazam with great tranlation
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Thank you.
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